Draft for Scene

Chrissy

Mrs. Guarino

Acting

First Draft

My scene is about a woman(Chrissy) in a grocery store who wants a specific chips in a certain container. She goes to grab them but another woman(Linda) gets them and they have a fight over the chips. Mean words are said and some physical action is displayed but finally my character gets the chips and walks away. I think Linda and I need to be more focused on how to present our lines and what physically actions we should do. The first draft we were hitting each other but it actually hurt so we need to pretend like we are fighting but not actually cause pain on each other. For the most part we have the lines down but we need to be certain so we can focus more on the scene then what to say next.